write about the best day in your life.
It such a regular day, but it has a different taste. You see people crying or laughing
on this day. Actually, that is what is happening in Jordan during the Graduation Day,
which we call the Result Day.
The Result Day is when the government announces the names of students who have
passed the standardized test, by posting them on the bulletin board of each school or
putting them on the websites.
In the summer of 2007, I was anxious to see my name among those who passed.
The night before that day, I hadn't slept well. I was worried a lot about the results.
Around 7 o'clock in the morning, I heard some fireworks, so I realized that the results
had been announced. I jumped from my bed and headed to the school without even
washing my face. After I reached it, the students were gathering at the bulletin board
looking up their names. I couldn't wait anymore, so I jumped over them to reach the
board and I saw my name. At that moment, I was overjoyed and my parents were too.
I really thank them for every thing they have done for me. I will never forget that
day when I saw my father's tears of happiness rolling on his cheeks. That day was the
best day in my life.
in your 3rd paragraph, instead of short sentences, combine it, and "reached it", change "it" to something refering to school. perhaps "very happy" can be replaced too, maybe "thrilled" or "overjoyed"?
at the end the sentence " i really thank him for everything, they have done for me" should not have the comma in the middle :)
and what is this for?
thanks for these comments.
It a regular day, but it has a different atmoshpere . You see people crying or laughing on this day. Actually, that is what is happening in Jordan during the Graduation Day, which we call the Result Day. The Result Day is when the government announces the names of students who have passed the standardized test by posting them on the bulletin board of each school or putting them on the websites.
Above, I made that all one paragraph.
In the summer of 2007, I was ... (very good paragraph!) At that moment, I was overjoyed , and my parents were too.
I really thank them for everything they have done for me. I will never forget that day when I saw my father's tears of ...
Beautiful. But what the heck is the prompt for this one? Does it fulfill the requirements?
Thanks a lot kevin.
the prompt is:
write an essay about the best day in your life.
Oh, I see. Well, that works well for it...
Many people have experienced the over whelming excitement that you feel as you approach high school graduation day, and for me, that’s a day that I will never forget. The amount of emotions that you feel on graduation day is unbelievable, and I have yet to experience anything else like it. I can remember feeling anxious to celebrate the big day with my friends and family, while at the same time I was panicking thinking about having to walk across the stage in front of that many people.
Then, the more I thought about the reality of graduation day, I started to get curious, but nervous, about being able to start a new chapter in my life once graduation day had passed. There are several reasons why I, still to this day, consider high school graduation day one of the most exciting days of my life. As exciting as it was to finally graduate high school, I still had some mixed emotions about it. When they called my name, I walked to the side of the stage, where I had to wait in a short line before actually crossing the stage.
I couldn’t wait to get that diploma in my hand, but I really thought I was going to have a panic attack on the side of the stage before that happened. I finally made it up onto the stage I shook the principles hand one last time as he handed me my diploma, and made it back off the stage without anything embarrassing happening. When I sat back down I felt relief that I had gotten that part over with, and could enjoy the remainder of the graduation. When the graduation ceremony came to an end, I rushed to the auditorium to celebrate with all of my friends and family.
I couldn’t believe how many people came to celebrate our graduation day with us. I knew my friends immediate families, but I got to meet everyone’s extended families, and hear stories about them that I will never forget. Then I took what felt like a million pictures, and hugged everyone I knew, and headed off to my graduation party to continue the celebration with the ones that I loved the most. That night I think I smiled and laughed more than I ever have in my life. As the end of the night approached us, I couldn’t stop thinking about how many mixed emotions I had about starting a whole new chapter in my life.
I couldn’t wait to go to college, meet all new people, get a degree so that I could start my career path, but I knew that meant I had to say goodbye to my two best friends, who were moving several hours away from me. This was one of the hardest things I had ever had to do in my life. We all cried a little, and then made promises to keep in touch, and then we were off into the real world! I was very happy to be at this point in my life, but I was scared deep down inside. When I look back on this day now, I still remember every detail as if it was yesterday.
I was so proud, and happy to be able to celebrate such an amazing day with all of my friends and family. I know I will never forget how embarrassed I was walking across the stage in front of all of those people, feeling famous after taking so many pictures, making our final memories together at our graduation parties, and then being a nervous wreck when it was time to go out into the world without my best friends at my side. High school graduation day was a very emotional day for me, but it was by far the most exciting day I have ever experienced in my life.